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T O P I C R E V I E Wwhiterabbita hand you hold like a lover's hand a mouth that kisses like a loverBut he is not a lover! No,he is a man who came and went.And even as you clutch his coateven as you lie togetherlong enough for flightless creatures to learnthe tradelong enough for dew and moss to meetYou are not a lover,no you are the one who comes and goesIn mornings of weeksthat pass in the ways that dreams passas you gathered your clothesand he closes the windowsbe careful, foryou were never loversyou only came and went.whiterabbitjust wrote this for a lover who is not a lover.26taurus Okay, maybe you are my soulmate whiterabbit. *wink wink*That was beautifully written. I love this part: quote:In mornings of weeksthat passes in the ways that dreams passas you gathered your clothesand he closes the windows...."the windows"........the eyes?.....I like it. Please, share more!26taurusThis part too. quote:And even as you clutch his coateven as you lie togetherlong enough for flightless creatures to learnthe tradelong enough for dew and moss to meetpixelpixie The last line summed it up beautifully..."You only came and went."Great!
That was beautifully written. I love this part:
quote:In mornings of weeksthat passes in the ways that dreams passas you gathered your clothesand he closes the windows
...."the windows"........the eyes?.....
I like it. Please, share more!
quote:And even as you clutch his coateven as you lie togetherlong enough for flightless creatures to learnthe tradelong enough for dew and moss to meet
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